This will be the first of many installments. I do not plan to comment on all such items except as i think worthwhile.
Look to my underlinings and insertions.
What am also trying to discover is the real place and polity of this world. Kingship goes back to the Bronze Age but we rarely get a good grasp of the territory involved or its size. What remains common is the local Big Man and some form of a council of wise men to handle contention..
THE SALUTATION OR PROLOGUE TO THE BRONZEBOOK
[ remarkably well spoken - arclein ]
[ This means much was channeled - arclein ]